Both of your comps look very good. Great job. As of right now I dont have any comments or suggestions, but I will try to come up with something by the end of class.
I'm impressed that you've done comps for each page for EACH version. Wow!
I think #2 is the best option for a portfolio. Definitely has that "professional" look. Strong color scheme. Plus the font in "ayers" looks to be the same font as your headers. That really gives the comp a sense of cohesion.
The series1 is more conservative and lest creative than the series2.
The composition series2 is the most attracting and welcome to read. It has a nice flow, harmony through all your pages. The colors scheme are well used to emphasize the important text and it bring a personal touch. Also, the design has a nice structure and alignment layout. Very strong design.
Improvement:
- I suggest to try to eliminate the grid from your background. It distracts the eye view and feel it does not belong with the composition. Maybe just a clean background will help for the eye.
Both of your comps look very good. Great job. As of right now I dont have any comments or suggestions, but I will try to come up with something by the end of class.
ReplyDeleteI'm impressed that you've done comps for each page for EACH version. Wow!
ReplyDeleteI think #2 is the best option for a portfolio. Definitely has that "professional" look. Strong color scheme. Plus the font in "ayers" looks to be the same font as your headers. That really gives the comp a sense of cohesion.
I really love both of your comps! Great job! I like how you used your text in comp 1, just like we talked about in class.
ReplyDeleteI think you should go with comp 2, its very strong and it looks very professional. I love your colors that you use and I think that it fits you.
Appealing design for the two design.
ReplyDeleteThe series1 is more conservative and lest creative than the series2.
The composition series2 is the most attracting and welcome to read. It has a nice flow, harmony through all your pages. The colors scheme are well used to emphasize the important text and it bring a personal touch. Also, the design has a nice structure and alignment layout. Very strong design.
Improvement:
- I suggest to try to eliminate the grid from your background. It distracts the eye view and feel it does not belong with the composition. Maybe just a clean background will help for the eye.
The rest is perfect.
GOOD JOB :)
Hey there, I design #2 is a very strong design. Great use of colors, and the utilizing the grid system really makes your design strong. Great job.
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